The Ugly Hearts - first chapter
Natalie Woods| Published
1265 days ago
Chapter 1 Who does she think she Is??
I´m walking into this crazy party, lights pulsing along with the music. I don´t know anyone here, and I don´t give a shit. I head to the kitchen and grab a beer. Looking around I scope out a pretty girl and working on what I´m gonna say I walk over and lean close to her.
"Hey girl, wanna have some fun? Cause your looking fine and I want me a piece of that pie." I whisper seductively into her ear. I watch her face heat up and I know that I´m about to score. But then something I don´t expect happens.
♥ emeralgreenlove ♥ Hey, Natalie, I love your book cover and your chapter set up is great.
You leave us wondering what is going on and you´ve caught our
attention with this plot. However, I need more character developmen
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