1987... - first chapter
899 days ago
The breeze was just fair and the sky was so clear. My friends and I made a plan to go out and
hang at the mall and just look at the new summer trends and watch cute boys
pass us, but I never went. Mom tells me
I have to take my brother to his friend’s birthday party.
"Where is it being held?" I question in an
annoyed voice, I don’t want to what-so-ever but mom can’t because she is leaving
for work as a waitress and dad has papers to write he’s a journalist.
"It’s the new pizza place just a few miles
west, and stop your huffing Kathy you don’t have to pick him up" Mom responds starts to sound annoyed with
me. I look down at the carpet that dad
thought it looked "classy" but to me... I think it is awful to look
"Fine! I don´t really have much of a choice, you’re
pointing a gun at my head" I huff and look up to see my mom starting to
get furious you could see steam coming out of her ears. I run to Jim´s room and see him playing with
his toy truck.
"Come on Jim I don´t have time for this" I
"Kathy be nice!" yells mom. I huff and see Jim stand up and get his bag
of clothes and his favorite new stuffed animal dad just "had" to buy
"What is that creepy thing?" I ask
"It Feddy Fabear!" he responds
smiling. I look down at the animal and
start getting the chills from its eyes.
"It´s creepy is what it is" I tell
him. I grab his hand and take him to my
car. I buckle him in and leave for the Pizzeria.
I turn on the radio to hear a commercial of
a new pizzeria. The speaker was a weird
"That´s Feddy!!! That’s where I go! Yay I gona
see feddy an chichi and bonie" he yells out with happiness. So this is the new Pizzeria Jim has been
excited for?. We get to the front of the
entrance and see a person in a stuffed bear suit handing balloons to the
kids. I park and turn the engine off and
see Jim has already ran out! I race out
of the car and grabbed Jim.
"Don´t ever run out like that!" I yell
out. Jim looks at me and starts getting
teary eyes. I put him down and told him
he scared me and should never scare me like that ever again. He held my hand and nodded and dragged me to
"Feddy! Feddy this is ma sissy Kathy, i Jim!"
Jim tells Freddy. I wave and got a creepy
feeling. When he answers he had a creepy
laughter following by his voice
"We´ll hello Jim and Kathy would you like a
balloon?" asks Freddy. Jim nods hysterically and I said sure. We got the balloons and show the employer Jims
invite. We went in and saw kids running
and screaming and laughing. There were
four more animals, a mechanical Freddy, a mechanical bunny, a mechanical duck
and a.... mechanical fox pirate? You got
to be kidding me? I can’t believe this,
and what makes it more interesting is that the mechanical animals move and talk
to everyone. Kids even play with foxy by
stealing his treasure and he comes after you, in the simplest way it was like
“You stole my treasure, I’m going to get you” yells
foxy as he’s chasing kids with pieces of fake gold. Jim starts dragging me to find his friend and
I just observe the place.
I saw Chicka
by some kids that were eating pizza and she is saying “Let’s eat!” Bonnie and Freddy are both asking kids if
they are having fun. Who managed to create these things, whoever did must be
very smart. Finally seeing Jim’s friends
mother I wave to get her to notice me but she was occupied by the group of
screaming children. I hold Jim’s hand and
walk towards her.
“Oh there’s Jim, everyone say hi Jim!” She says in a
“Hi Jim!!!” says the group of kids. Jim lets go of my hand and hugs
everyone. Jim’s friend’s mother comes up
to me and smiles
“Hi Kathy thank you so much for bringing him,
Charlie was so anxious, he kept asking me if Jim was coming ha-ha”
“It was no problem Mrs. Joules. Do you know who created these… things?” I
ask. She looks at me smiling and says
“No but whoever did must really like kids and must
be very smart huh?” I look at her and smile. She took the words from my
mouth. But I’m kind of worried; doesn’t
everything come with a price? I mean I thought my car would always be
functional then I learn that it has malfunctions. I see a man come up to the stage followed by
the animatronics. He taps on the microphone
which in result gives off a screeching sound.
“Ouch ha-ha well I just want to welcome you all to
our opening ceremony of Freddy Fazbears, A magical place for kids and grownups
a like, where fantasy and fun comes to life. We hope you will enjoy this day
and make a child’s day brighter! Now we do have some rules but we assure you
that if you follow the rules that are scattered throughout the place this place
will be an enjoyable time. So please
have a wonderful time”
owner got off the animatronics start singing a song. The kids get on the stage and dance. Jim and Charlie both ask if they can play
with Foxy, we both agree and they run to Pirate Cove. I get an eerie feeling and some guy comes up
next to me.
“My little girl loves it here…. Oh sorry my names
Fredrick, my daughters in your brothers class, her names Brittney” I look at
him at smile
“Oh yeah I met her and your wife at the
registrations, how is she by the way?” I ask, he gives me a concerning look and
as he was about to tell me something Brittney runs up to him laughing.
“Daddy I love this pwace, I love it sooo much can I
pwease pway wif Jim and Char at Piwate Cove?” Brittney asks as she’s holding
her dad’s leg.
“Of course honey go have fun…. But be careful Foxy
will spaz sometimes due to her fuses.”
Fredrick explains as his daughter runs towards Jim and Charlie. I look at him and realize now that he’s got
to be the creator of these things.
“So you made these?” I ask hoping that he heard
me. He looks at me and smiles
“Oh yes, I didn’t spend years in engineering, technology,
and science just for nothing, I have always wanted to create something fun and
lovable that was so much better than that Chucky Cheeses. Of course that resulted in Crystal leaving me
and Brittney because she could not be with two children but hey… Brittney and I
are doing fine without her” I felt sort
of guilty of asking him that question. I
lowered my head and apologize as I look back up I see him looking at me weirdly
“Don’t be sorry, it was a question you wanted to ask
doesn’t feel like it was a stupid thing to do” he replies.
I smile and Mrs. Joules handed me a piece of
pizza, the cheese was so stringy and the pepperoni was not to burnt and it just
made everything remarkable. I suddenly
got goose bumps as I saw something on the corner of my eye….
“Oh GOD!!!” I scream out.
“What is it Kathy… really? Really Kathy? Hahaha”
Mrs. Joules says laughing her butt off.
I could feel my heart skipping a beat as I was holding onto Fredrick for
“Kathy… it’s just Chica calm down” I can’t calm
down, I just got spooked by a tall animatronic chicken!
“Let’s eat!” Chica says with her creepy smile that
just makes me clinch more to Fredrick.
“I…uh can’t breathe Kathy. You have to let go sometime, she won’t hurt
you” Fredrick says as he tries to pull me off.
I finally let go of my grasp when Chica heads toward another table of
kids. I apologize to him and he just
laughs his butt off. I tell him I was
going to walk around and he nodded. I
could leave right now… why am I not leaving? I walk around some more and see
directions that seem to be rules.
poop on floor.
close to Mom.
“Well some of those rules
are broken, there kids for goodness sakes there going to yell” I tell myself
out loud. I see the Freddy costume in
the storage room, they left the storage door open? as I
close the door I got memorized in Freddie’s eyes I go up to the costume and
touch it. Soft. I then hear someone walking and before I exit
the door someone shut it and locked it.
I start hitting the door and I hear footsteps again followed by cursing.
“What the hell are you
doing in here? Don’t you know it’s not good to snoop around?! Get out of
there!” he says as he’s pulling me out.
I look at him and see that in his eyes he was really concerned,
“I’m sorry sir I just
wanted to see what was so fancy about this bear”
ShelbyNSmith2003@gmail.com Is that guy the customer that foxy bit? WRITE MORE PLZ!!!! Oh by
the way, on time my brother (when he was young) ´accidentally´
pooped on the floor and seeing the rules made me laugh.
730 Days ago
Yushii really good story. Hope you make more
873 Days ago
Sugar & Spice The Bite Of 87´ , Where you learn not to make fun of robot animals.
890 Days ago
emem I will write more probably this wkend. if u guys have any
ideas plz dont be afraid to shoot them at me :P thanx for
the support of this book
893 Days ago
emem Hey you guys i accidentally forgot my password and had
to make new one. so i´m going to redo this story into this
account and *Night-Owl* i will use different cover page I
thought this was Ok to use
893 Days ago