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Spirit of Foxes (Rewriting) - first chapter
Larimar | Published 1547 days ago

Spirit of Foxes Book II - Black Sun 

This book will be rewritten sometime in the future. Expect a few inconsistencies between the current chapters (as this chapter was the only one updated, the rest are from the original writing of this book on StoriesCity). This chapter, as well as the others will be rewritten with a (hopefully) better plot, character development, etc. 

Two little fox cubs were born. Their soft, thin fur barely covered their bodies. But little did they know that before they could breathe their first, they were abducted by a scientist, leaving their mother vixen to weep.

The two were taken to a laboratory where they were operated on. This was part of a long project that the scientists had been undertaking in the hope of successfully changing an animals species.

Marcia, the older red fox with a slightly darker coat, was separated from Fern, the younger cub, to be tested on. The scientists inserted some DNA from an arctic fox, trying to alter the species. They slipped the DNA into an intricate and fragile line...and it worked. The Marcias fur became a snowy white.

Both of the little cubs, though, had been injected with a back-up plan. Two powers to help them when in danger.

A month passed, slowly.

The two foxes slipped out of their captivities, Fern tearing the cage down with a strength she couldnt recognize, and Marcia simply waking up outside of the cage. Lingering above Marcia was a ferret whom had pressed the Release from cages button in the scientists control room. Each experiment who survived pelted from the laboratory, running for their lives.

Marcia and Fern found each other and ran neck-to-neck. They could barely see because of all the animals surrounding them, running in the same direction...escaping the clutches of the humans.

The scientists knew how risky escaped subjects could be, so they began the chase. Hours of running restlessly, with no water or food. Some plainly gave up and fell face-first onto the ground, re-captured.

But the stronger ones kept running; Marcia and Fern.

Soon, they felt a feeling. A strong one, which compelled them to stop and nourish themselves. Slurping up as much water as they could, and then wolfing down some blueberries, the foxes began a new quest to find a home.

They didnt know that a shady-looking silver cross fox had been following them the entire time; right from the escape to now.

The fox approached them silently. So silently, that he surprised them when he leaped before them. He didnt speak or make a sound, but the two young vixens sure did. They screeched in alarm. "Who are you?" Marcia screamed, pushing herself closer to the ground in fear. Fern mimicked her older sisters actions.

"Dont worry," the fox began, lifting a paw. "Im Dark."

As soon as he uttered dark a pretty red fox pranced out of some nearby bushes. "My name is Cherry." she said sincerely, dipping her head. Marcia and Fern were not familiar with the actions, as these were the first other foxes they had ever met and talked to. "I-Im Marcia, and this is F-Fern." Marcia trembled, not sure of how to look at the situation.

"We know that," Cherry said, stretching. "But Marcia, your true name is now Snow." 

Marcia, now Snow, looked up at Cherry. "How can that be?"  she asked, looking down at her little white paws. 

Dark pushed Cherry aside. "Were your parents, thats how. Now follow us." he ordered, turning around and padding off. The two sisters exchanged surprising glances. "So these are our parents..." mumbled Fern inaudibly.

That was how it began - strangely, but it was a beginning.

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I love it!!
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thanks! c:
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Wow this is really cool. I´m writing my own book called ´Fox´ so it´s great to see someone doing something so unique with these animals! Please continue
Updated 997 Days ago
Thank you so much u v u
Updated 1081 Days ago
WOAH SO AWESOME!!!!!!!! please continue it! you should send this in to a publisher when you finish it is so good I would totally buy it
Updated 1082 Days ago
Kudos to everyone for all your feedback! I started this project when I was 10 and back then I saw things slightly differently. Reading it now, I felt as if I should add and take away some aspects.
Updated 1096 Days ago
Truly a beautiful piece of work - please continue with this book, it is one of a kind!
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Dream Writer
aw... I love foxes! So cute!
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Thanks everyone! (and yes, she does)
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Snow looks like a little emo lol
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Curtis the Sorcerer
talk about awesomeness!
Updated 1157 Days ago
this is an awesome book!! i definitely give it a 10/10.
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yes, and horses
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I love the titan effects!Bravo.
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Girly Gamer
Just finished this book... 10/10 - bravo!
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21! (19)
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What´s 9+10?
Updated 1248 Days ago
Thank you, and it´s okay. I was quite busy too.
Updated 1259 Days ago
I finished the review! Sorry it took so long, I was busy today.
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Cool story :) I´m going to start on the review as soon as I can.
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But continue with their parents, i wanna know what happened to them.
Updated 1519 Days ago
This is so good so far! I love foxes, i really do. this is amazing!
Updated 1519 Days ago
The Doctor
good story but it could use a little more action but other than that its ok
Updated 1542 Days ago
How you ended it made me interested to read it more!
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Janae <3
Can you teach me the basics of writing a good story? But teach it so a ten year old can understand... Sorry I am asking so much of you it´s just that you are older than me (I think) and you write so good. Thanks :)
Updated 1545 Days ago
Cool story
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thanks niran!
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wow! this is really good!
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