i was walking home from the shops, brandon and mam had was already home. i was slowly walking behind and i couldnt be bothred to catch up. i felt like there was a black figure following me. i saw him at the shops and he was still walking in my route. i turned around and he smiled at me, his hand raised. my green eyes went as large as saucers and i ran, i was scared. i managed to fet home and i went in my back garden. there was a rocket and i really couldnt believe my eyes. i jumped happily.
(help with spellings) to be continued by toby stanley arnold