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Rifkas Mega Birthday - first chapter
ivor | Published 793 days ago

                                                    Happy Birthday Rifka

      Chapter one:


         "It has been getting dark so late." Thought Rifka to herself, she was a beautiful young girl, with a sparkle in her eye.  In the Springtime as the days grew longer, it meant that Rifka had more time to play with her friends outdoors and today was a beautiful day. She was just taking a walk with her friends enjoying the afternoon. She felt happy because her birthday was in a few days, and she felt that this year  something special was going to happen.   Last year her Mom and Dad took her and her friends to that pizza place, with all the games.  She danced for hours. This year was going to be even more special, although she could not explain why she felt this way. 

        Hey, wanna walk down by the brook,  It would be real pretty this time of day, maybe we could  even see some of the tiny fish   Rifka and her friends all agreed,  The brook was now flowing with the melting snows from the hills. The girls would spend summer days by the brook,  watching the frogs and dragon flies.  The brook was ten feet wide, and just a few feet deep at the deepest part down here in the meadow.  You could wade across it.  Now in the springtime, the waters were still icy cold.

        I dare you to cross it Said Linda, 

        Yeah, it will be good luck if you can cross the stones without slipping Agreed her friends.  Rifka was feeling brave, and took the challenge. She slipped off her good shoes and socks.  The grass on the bank was wet and a little slippery.  There were five stones  that rose above the swirling waters.  The were placed about two feet apart, and were kind of flat, Stepping stones.  Rifka had crossed the Brook many times before, it was no big deal.

       The First stone Rifka announced, as she stepped out on to it. The rock was cold under her feet. 

        The Next stone She announced bravely as her friends watched.  When she reached the fourth rock, something happened,  A dragonfly zipped around her legs,  she lifted her leg, and started to reach for the last stone, when she lost her balance, 

        She splashed in the shallow water, it was only up to her ankle,  but her fall landed her on her knees, her hands were on the rocky bottom, holding her up. 

       Aww Her friends said, although one was laughing.

      Sorry Said Ann,  You looked funny."  Her friends ran across the shallow brook to help Rifka up,  Before they got to her, she had already seen the shiny white rock, that looked like a marble.  She scooped it up, and before any of her friends could see, she put it in her pocket.

        Examining the pretty rock, at home, later that evening, she was very happy with her find. It was perfectly round, no nicks or scratches,  it looked like it could be clear, but the insides revealed a lacy like crystal growth.  Rifka swore that it felt warm in her hand. And when the lights were just turned out,  it seemed to glow with a cool blue white glow of its own.


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Pencils are fine, I do not have the Illustrator program, but I do use Photoshop to make giant boy pictures. Check out my yahoo group, Ivors Megaboy art project.
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it cut me off, I meant to say with that software
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That would be awesome if you drew some more illustrations for this story, your art skills are superb. I notice you draw in pencil, have you ever used Adobe Illustrator? You can make a whole comic with
Updated 724 Days ago
And not a word from Rebecca, whom this story is about. How many of the characters do you recognize?
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I think that this story is really good.
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